Age

27 09 2012

The years fall far down
to gather like broken birds’
nests on forest floors.

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17 responses

30 09 2012
timruane24

v. nice on age.

30 09 2012
glynfedwards

Thanks. Haiku seem to work well when its 3 am and you know you’ve had all the sleep you’re going to get.

30 09 2012
15wattLasVegas

Nice haiku, works on several levels. Thank you for the follow, I enjoy your writing!

30 09 2012
glynfedwards

Thanks. The follow was just on the basis of the title ‘fetal horses’- great poem.

30 09 2012
15wattLasVegas

Thanks. Fetal horses may gallop in the womb was a little news headline that grabbed me a few years back. I will read some more of your work soon.

30 09 2012
glynfedwards

Genius. Sounds like Dylan Thomas.

30 09 2012
15wattLasVegas

It is a striking phrase.
I welcome comments anytime.

1 10 2012
ManicDdaily

Wonderful. k.

1 10 2012
glynfedwards

Thanks!

2 10 2012
readinpleasure

Very powerful

2 10 2012
glynfedwards

Thanks Celestine

8 10 2012
free penny press

Beautiful words…

9 10 2012
glynfedwards

Thank you

2 12 2012
tortoisesoup

Wonderful haiku! You have inspired me to attempt a response:

Words on age drop down
Like golden stars falling sweet
To earth with wise joy.

2 12 2012
glynfedwards

i have been out-haikud! thanks for the thoughtful response

16 02 2013
Clyde

Especially nice – and timely for me! I spent an afternoon yesterday with a peer talking about aging and others’ perception of those who are a little older . . . like me. Again, well done!

17 02 2013
glynfedwards

Thanks. Tiredness restricted me to the haiku form but they’re such an instant achievement that I’ll have another go.

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